Saturday, December 25, 2010

summer search the winter dream "a poem in sedoka"

fawns grazing lightly
as snow whispers gently down
pine trees catching white diamonds

half frozen stream runs
searching for summer solstice
blue jays sing the winter dream


   T.A.L Jr.

       

3 comments:

  1. great sedoka! you are right on with syllables and beautiful content

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  2. That is beautiful, what a wonderful picture you've painted with these words.

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  3. What a lovely scene. So serene and comforting are your words.

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