Saturday, December 25, 2010

summer search the winter dream "a poem in sedoka"

fawns grazing lightly
as snow whispers gently down
pine trees catching white diamonds

half frozen stream runs
searching for summer solstice
blue jays sing the winter dream


   T.A.L Jr.

       
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3 comments:

  1. RiverDecember 25, 2010 at 8:12 AM

    great sedoka! you are right on with syllables and beautiful content

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  2. SusannahJanuary 18, 2011 at 3:18 AM

    That is beautiful, what a wonderful picture you've painted with these words.

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  3. Myrna R.January 18, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    What a lovely scene. So serene and comforting are your words.

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